Friday, June 14, 2013

English formal letter Draft 4

Draft 4

Dear Prime Minister Singh,

Disappointment in how the police mishandled the rape incident

I am writing to you to express my disappointment towards the mishandling of the recent rape case that happened in New Delhi recently. It has sparked nationwide protests. At the same time, many people including myself are very aghast with how the police in India handled this case.

I strongly feel that the police in India do not have any sense of urgency. For example, the recent gang rape in New Delhi had showed us that police in India handled exigent cases in a sluggish way. It was reported on the news that a friend of the rape victim who had witnessed the cruel tragedy told the reporter, they were both seriously injured, but no one attended to them. Not even the police officer. He also added that the police delayed the time by arguing over who had the jurisdiction instead of sending the couple to the hospital.

Moreover, I am very disappointed with how women are treated in India. Women are not equally treated as man. For example, women are banned from using hand phones, wear jeans, shorts and even t-shirts. It was said to prevent love affairs, elopement and rape cases. However, both love affairs and elopement involve both genders, but why are the males not banned for any of the above? In fact, by introducing such laws will only make females in India inferior. I suggest that you can actually implement laws that are fair to all and not biased in favor of the males.

Furthermore, I feel that stricter laws could be enforced to decrease the number of crimes in your country. I also feel that rapist should be severely punishment so as to decrease the number of rape cases. I suggest that you can actually implement severe punishment such as life imprisonment, chemical castration and death penalty.

Lastly, I hope that you will looked into these problems and make improvement to the judicial system in India. I also hope that in the near future, both male and females will be treated equally. In addition, I hope that you can raise awareness of the public and educate females on how to protect themselves so as to prevent them from becoming the next rape victim.

Yours sincerely,

Ng Lay Hoon

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