Friday, June 14, 2013

English formal letter Draft 6

Draft 6
Dear Prime Minister Singh,
Disappointment in how the police mishandled the rape incident
I am writing to you to express my disappointment towards the mishandling of the recent rape case that happened in New Delhi. It has sparked nationwide protests. At the same time, many people including myself are very aghast with how the police in India handled this case.

I strongly feel that the police in India do not have any sense of urgency. For example, the recent gang rape in New Delhi had showed us that police in India handled exigent cases in a sluggish way. It was reported on the news that a friend of the rape victim who had witnessed the cruel tragedy told the reporter, they were both seriously injured, but no one attended to them. Not even the police officer. He also added that the police delayed the time by arguing over who had the jurisdiction instead of sending the naked and bloodied couple to the hospital.

Moreover, I am very disappointed with how women are treated in India. Women are not equally treated as man. For instance, women are banned from using hand phones, wear jeans, shorts and even t-shirts. It was said to prevent love affairs, elopement and rape cases. However, both love affairs and elopement involve both genders, but why are the males not banned for any of the above? In fact, by introducing such laws only makes females in India inferior. Women play an important role in the society. Without women, who is going to cook, clean, and take care of the children? Who is going to bear the pain when giving birth?  I suggest that you can actually implement laws that are fair to all and not biased in favor of the males.

Furthermore, I feel that stricter laws should be enforced to decrease the number of crimes in your country. I also feel that rapist should be severely punished so as to serve as a warning to the public that raping is a serious offence, at the same time decreasing the number of rape cases. I suggest that you can actually implement severe punishment such as life imprisonment, chemical castration and death penalty. I believe such punishment could stop rape from happening in future, allowing your female citizen to live in peace and not living in tenterhooks.

Lastly, I hope that you will looked into these problems and make improvement to the judicial system in India. I also hope that in the near future, both males and females will be treated equally. In addition, I hope that you can raise awareness of the public and educate females on how to protect themselves so as to prevent them from becoming the next rape victim. I strongly believe that you are a good prime minister and you will not allow such crimes to be committed in your country. Likewise, I trust that you will definitely make great changes to your country, bringing India to a greater height. I looked forward to see changes in the life of women in India.

Yours sincerely,

Ng Lay Hoon

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