Dear Prime
Minister Singh,
The
rape incident that happened in New Delhi had been spread worldwide. At the same
time, many people are very disappointed with how the police in India handled
this case including myself. I am writing this to tell you how disappointed I am
about the way police in India handled such cases.
Firstly,
I felt that the police in India are not serious at work. Example, the recent
rape case that happened in New Delhi showed us that police in India treated
rape cases as nothing. It was reported on the news that the boyfriend of the
rape victim said that both he and his girlfriend were seriously injured.
However, when the police arrived at the scene, they delayed the time by arguing
over who had the jurisdiction instead of sending the naked and bloodied couple
to the hospital.
Secondly,
I felt that the police in India handled rape cases hastily. It has been
mentioned that in the past, rape victims were asked to marry the rapist instead
of the rapist being punished. It sounded so ridiculous to many people around
the world. We are already in the 21st century and yet the judicial system
of India is moving at a very slow pace. Have you ever thought about how the
rape victims felt if they were to marry off to the rapist who had once hurt
them? Could you imagine if one of them was your daughter?
Thirdly,
I am very disappointed with how the women in India are treated. Women were
banned from using handphones, wear jeans, shorts and even t-shirts. It was said
that to reduce love affair, elopement and rape cases. Does it really help to
decrease the number of rape cases? Even if it does, both love affairs and elopement
involves male, but why are they not banned from using handphones? In fact, by
doing this, it only makes the females in India inferior.
Lastly,
I hope you will look into these problems and make changes to the judicial
system in India and have better treatment towards the women in India. In
addition, I hope you will be able to improve on the way police handle rape
cases.
Yours
sincerely,
Lay
Hoon
Subject Verb Agreement.
ReplyDelete"Women were banned from using handphones, wear jeans, shorts and even t-shirts" change it to
"Women were banned from using handphones,wearing jeans,shorts and even t-shirts"
"It has been mentioned that in the past, ..." change to
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" Could you imagine if one of them was your daughter? "
ReplyDeleteThis statement sounds very rude, you sould say "Can you imgaine what will happen if one was your family member?"
In the first paragraph, say positive things first before complaining to the pm.
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